Sam's Backup Page ([personal profile] cblj_backup) wrote2009-02-10 03:59 pm

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Okay, kids, bring the popcorn and gather around. It's time for Sam to tell a story. Fortunately I think this story has quite a good ending: the unveiling of the Sekrit Project. :)

Four years ago, I moved to Austin to look for work after grad school. I wasn't having much luck, and I was living with my parents and basically confined to the house all day. After about four months of this I realised that if I didn't do something to validate my existence I was going to do something I'd regret, so I decided to write a novel. Starting in September, I wrote almost every night -- from ten to midnight, usually, or sometimes a little longer. I averaged about 900 words a day and gave myself Saturday nights off. That went on for four months.

I didn't talk about it because I was hoping to shop it around when it was done. I did finish it, edit it, and shop it, though none of the eighty-odd agents I sent it to took me up on it. I moved to Chicago, got some work, forgot about the book. A couple of weeks ago, while I was migrating hard drives, I took a look at it for the first time in two years and realised why it never sold: it was terrible.

So I rewrote it, using what I'd learned in the process of writing The Dead Isle. I cut about ten thousand words, added about thirty thousand, and included several subplots and characters that had been absent the first time around.

Where it gets interesting for most of you, especially those of you who were around for the first run of Cartographer's Craft, is the plot. I had no idea what I wanted to write about, and very few stories I wanted to tell, so I consulted Ellis Graveworthy: I went to Cartographer's Craft and looked up the plots of the novels he'd written.

Wizard Bird was too close to HP -- it was always meant to be a satire of it -- and Two Kneazles was as well, plus hello whole boatloads of historical research. Shop Gods was possible, but would have also required a lot more research than I was willing to put into what was essentially a survival mechanism at the time.

I wrote Animagus Winter.

I changed the location, shook up the plot until it wasn't dependent on the HP-verse anymore, and called it Nameless. It's a sort of magical-reality ode to small towns, with a little bit of mask theory and agrarian earth witchery thrown in for good measure. It had to settle for a few years before I was ready to really own it, but I am now.

I'd like to know what all of you think of it, before I give it one more rewrite and start looking at publishing again. I didn't want to post it all in a whack, because that's a bit overwhelming, so instead I'll be posting it in chapters. It'll be just like most of the fics I post, except that it's complete so I can schedule regular postings (like I did for Two Centres). New chapters will be going up three times a week: Tuesdays, Thursdays, and Sundays. Given that there are thirteen chapters, it'll be about a month's worth of new fiction, which seems like the right length of time. Sort of a Cafe Book Club.

So, without further fuss, I'd like to introduce you to Christopher Dusk, our narrator and the proprietor of Dusk Books in the small midwestern town of Low Ferry, Illinois. He'll take it from here. We both hope you enjoy it. :)

( The first week in September that year saw the heat of summer not yet faded in Chicago... )

[identity profile] maeritrae.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 01:19 am (UTC)(link)
Sam. Sam.

It's a quarter past one in the morning, I'm only awake because I spent the whole evening cleaning my oven (now spotless, thanks for asking, and the hob is making progress too), and...and you do this to me. When I have work in the morning. My heart is racing. I get to read Animagus Winter.

...

Surely one chapter won't take that long...

[identity profile] danceswchopstck.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 01:40 am (UTC)(link)
Looking forward to it! Have saved chapter 1 but not looked at it yet.

Um, did you want readers to think of Black Books when you named it Dusk Books?
*looks askance at the fannishness of that in an original novel*

But, as I say, looking forward to it!
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[identity profile] veryshortlist.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 03:23 am (UTC)(link)
Sam, fanfic reading is usually the equivalent of eating junk food. I regard it as a bit of a time waster and empty of nutrition/ brain nutrition. When I read Sweet Home um...four years ago, I thought 'I would buy this in a bookshop.' I'm so glad that you're sending your book to publishers again. Remember, it took J.K. Rowling a lot of rejections to get Harry Potter out there.

Having said all that, off to read. ;)

[identity profile] jiapa.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 03:44 am (UTC)(link)
I'm delighted to see this, and I'm looking forward to reading it, but I'm a bit concerned that showing us the story before shopping it to agents/publishers might decrease the appeal to them.

Of course, you're not going to tell them, but what if they make you sign a contract, like, that it's not been published before? And then they find out?

Mebbe if you only put a few chapters up and call them teasers?

Oh, I dunno. It's your novel and I'd love to see it, but I'd feel bad if it didn't get professionally published because all of us saw it first.

[identity profile] silvery-wraith.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 04:45 am (UTC)(link)
omg, Animagus Winter.

*speechless*

Even with all the rejection (stupid publishers don't know what they're missing!), I'm excited that you're preparing for the publishing world. I feel like you're going on an adventure and this time, you're taking the whole cafe with you. Yay!

*off to read*

[identity profile] why-me-why-not.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 05:49 am (UTC)(link)
Animagus Winter? Seriously? Sam, you just totally made my night! (even though I have homework to do and can't actual read anything yet, boo!)

[identity profile] m-erechyn.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 08:39 am (UTC)(link)
Well, I haven't gotten around to reading that first super-sekrit-project post, but I'd love to. And I also wanted to say thanks for just sharing your writing process/history with us-- I'm sure it helps you to get it down on paper (er, screen...) but it's fascinating and very cool to hear about other people's writing, especially if they're as talented as you. :D

[identity profile] hidden-gems.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 08:46 am (UTC)(link)
I finally started reading The Dead Isle but I'm going to have to put it on the back burner for a bit because I cannot miss this. I had to go back to "I wrote Animagus Winter." several times before I believed it.

I must be reasonable and work right now but I will read the first chapter before the end of the day.

This is so incredibly exciting. It deserves a Tamaki icon.

[identity profile] debitha.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 10:25 am (UTC)(link)
You wrote Animagus Winter. ♥ I really wish I wasn't at work right now, because I want to start reading immediately!

I am so very excited about this. (And The Dead Isle now that it's finished.) There goes my list of Books to Read.

2500 copy-editors. Sounds scary to me. :o)

[identity profile] annemjw.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 12:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh my god, this is so exciting! Yay!

**goes off to read**

(Anonymous) 2009-02-11 06:05 pm (UTC)(link)
OH. MY. GOD.

Excuse me while I scream.

*incoherent joy*

[identity profile] nakki.livejournal.com 2009-02-12 07:06 am (UTC)(link)

[identity profile] mcgonagalls-cat.livejournal.com 2009-02-16 06:47 am (UTC)(link)
You hadda do post this when I didn't have any time, didn't you....
And it hadda be so good....


Two tiny opinionated comments :

"Not yet!" the boy said cheerfully. "He just moved here."

"Has he now."
<-technically that’s a question.




Back in the shop, I switched on the lights and settled myself in a wing-chair near the door, feet propped on a battered ottoman. I had planned on reading, but the boy's questions had <delete, not necessary, sentence would be more interesting without. .

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