Sam's Backup Page ([personal profile] cblj_backup) wrote2009-02-10 03:59 pm

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Okay, kids, bring the popcorn and gather around. It's time for Sam to tell a story. Fortunately I think this story has quite a good ending: the unveiling of the Sekrit Project. :)

Four years ago, I moved to Austin to look for work after grad school. I wasn't having much luck, and I was living with my parents and basically confined to the house all day. After about four months of this I realised that if I didn't do something to validate my existence I was going to do something I'd regret, so I decided to write a novel. Starting in September, I wrote almost every night -- from ten to midnight, usually, or sometimes a little longer. I averaged about 900 words a day and gave myself Saturday nights off. That went on for four months.

I didn't talk about it because I was hoping to shop it around when it was done. I did finish it, edit it, and shop it, though none of the eighty-odd agents I sent it to took me up on it. I moved to Chicago, got some work, forgot about the book. A couple of weeks ago, while I was migrating hard drives, I took a look at it for the first time in two years and realised why it never sold: it was terrible.

So I rewrote it, using what I'd learned in the process of writing The Dead Isle. I cut about ten thousand words, added about thirty thousand, and included several subplots and characters that had been absent the first time around.

Where it gets interesting for most of you, especially those of you who were around for the first run of Cartographer's Craft, is the plot. I had no idea what I wanted to write about, and very few stories I wanted to tell, so I consulted Ellis Graveworthy: I went to Cartographer's Craft and looked up the plots of the novels he'd written.

Wizard Bird was too close to HP -- it was always meant to be a satire of it -- and Two Kneazles was as well, plus hello whole boatloads of historical research. Shop Gods was possible, but would have also required a lot more research than I was willing to put into what was essentially a survival mechanism at the time.

I wrote Animagus Winter.

I changed the location, shook up the plot until it wasn't dependent on the HP-verse anymore, and called it Nameless. It's a sort of magical-reality ode to small towns, with a little bit of mask theory and agrarian earth witchery thrown in for good measure. It had to settle for a few years before I was ready to really own it, but I am now.

I'd like to know what all of you think of it, before I give it one more rewrite and start looking at publishing again. I didn't want to post it all in a whack, because that's a bit overwhelming, so instead I'll be posting it in chapters. It'll be just like most of the fics I post, except that it's complete so I can schedule regular postings (like I did for Two Centres). New chapters will be going up three times a week: Tuesdays, Thursdays, and Sundays. Given that there are thirteen chapters, it'll be about a month's worth of new fiction, which seems like the right length of time. Sort of a Cafe Book Club.

So, without further fuss, I'd like to introduce you to Christopher Dusk, our narrator and the proprietor of Dusk Books in the small midwestern town of Low Ferry, Illinois. He'll take it from here. We both hope you enjoy it. :)

( The first week in September that year saw the heat of summer not yet faded in Chicago... )
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[personal profile] aunty_marion 2009-02-10 11:58 pm (UTC)(link)
*bounce*

*bounce* *bounce* *BOUNCE!!!!!*

[identity profile] copperbadge.livejournal.com 2009-02-10 11:59 pm (UTC)(link)
I hope you enjoy it!

[identity profile] twirlynoodle.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 12:01 am (UTC)(link)
What about all those books out now that are basically printed and bound pre-existing blogs?

[identity profile] copperbadge.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 12:02 am (UTC)(link)
Those aren't fiction -- they're afiliated with a blog, which is free publicity, so they're taken a bit differently. At least I think so -- I don't know much about how it all works to be honest.

[identity profile] copperbadge.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 12:03 am (UTC)(link)
LOL! I suppose they could. I know a lot of newly published authors who came up in fandom have taken their fics and first-tries down...

Closest I've ever got to getting a novel published...I got a letter of interest from an agent I solicited once, but he decided not to take it when he saw the full manuscript. That was an early draft of Nameless, in fact.

[identity profile] sopdetly.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 12:11 am (UTC)(link)
I MAY HAVE SQUEED MY PANTS A LITTLE.

OOPS.

Seriously, I'm so excited! I was already excited to sit down and re-read J&E...er, The Dead Isle, but now THIS TOO??? *flails*

[identity profile] satora-chan.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 12:13 am (UTC)(link)
Will you be doing that if you get published? D: I mean, that will basically exact a wave of horror out of the entire cafe and a rush of downloaded .pdfs, but I can understand the logic...

Do you think you can reapproach the agent once you've edited and revised Nameless? Or does "rejection" mean "rejection 4eva"?

Also, when you do get published (I HAVE FAITH), what will you do when everyone in the Cafe learns of your offline identity? Or do you have humanity's faith in us that we won't do anything stupid/idiotic/etc.? Or will you take a pseudonym?
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[personal profile] saburi 2009-02-11 12:16 am (UTC)(link)
Oddly enough, I just pulled out the PDF of Cartographer's Craft last night to re-read some of my favorite bits! I'm so excited to get a chance to read this new novel as well!

[identity profile] satora-chan.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 12:16 am (UTC)(link)
Ha, now I'm imagining the published version of your blog:

LIFE OF SAM
or "How my life ranges between a Monty Python sketch and a Monty Python movie (with a dash of blues, oil, and theatery). Sort of chronicled from 2003-2009."

[identity profile] metallumai.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 12:18 am (UTC)(link)
All the best cafes have clubs-- they meet in the mornings to discuss: books, cigars, religion, whatever. A Sam's Cafe Book Club is a marvelous idea, and so convenient when the proprietor is also an author! Brilliant idea!
<3 <3 <3 (as some Cafe denizen whose name I forget pointed out a while back, the hearts DO look like boobs!)

*peruses Ch 1 while sipping tea* I do like the atmosphere of Low Ferry, Christopher's contented dealings with his neighbours, and young Clare's reading style! Well done Sam!!

[identity profile] copperbadge.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 12:21 am (UTC)(link)
No cigar clubs! No smoking around the books! :D

Hearts = boobs was me, actually *grins* I BOOB YOU!

I owe you an email too -- didn't get to the research I'd planned today but will tomorrow, promise.

[identity profile] isaluna.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 12:22 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks! I'll definately take you up on that if necessary.

[identity profile] copperbadge.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 12:23 am (UTC)(link)
I think legally I might have to. But I'd make everything available and warn everyone first.

I don't even recall which agent it was now, I sent out well over eighty inquiries. I could re-solicit but I think I'd be...kind of embarrassed.

As for anonymity...well, plenty of writers are recluses :D

[identity profile] wyvernrabbit.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 12:35 am (UTC)(link)
Two comments on this journal in two days. I feel like a hardcore creeper. D=

I'm really look forward to reading this, since your writing was how I started reading your LJ in the first place, and this sounds pretty damn awesome.

But I really posted to say that, as someone who is currently living with my parents, looking for work, and confined to the house for prolonged periods of time, hearing about someone doing something actually productive with that situation has completely renewed by inspiration to actually do something justifiable with my time. So you are now my inspiration, and I really thank you for that. =) (I'm sorry if I sound even more like a creeper after that paragraph.)

[identity profile] cleversimon.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 01:01 am (UTC)(link)
You sent me a draft of this a while ago; I was thinking of re-reading it soon. Now I can read the New and Improved version! Yay!

Postscript: A request

[identity profile] cleversimon.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 01:04 am (UTC)(link)
Would it be a huge pain in the ass for you to tag posts in theoriginalsam as Dead Isle or Nameless, respectively? For ease of linking when I make all my friends read them, you see. :D

[identity profile] telyanofcelore.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 01:07 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, this is nice. Of course, I haven't actually found one story of yours that I didn't like, but this is even nicer than most of those. I really enjoy the roof fixing bits, and also the bookbinding - from some experience with both, although not so much with the roof fixing. I also like this because I can tell that I'm going to learn new and interesting things from it already, which is the first thing I look for in a novel. So thank you very much for posting it, and I'll try to provide constructive criticism after this instead of inarticulate versions of 'this is awesome and I love it'.

[identity profile] maeritrae.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 01:19 am (UTC)(link)
Sam. Sam.

It's a quarter past one in the morning, I'm only awake because I spent the whole evening cleaning my oven (now spotless, thanks for asking, and the hob is making progress too), and...and you do this to me. When I have work in the morning. My heart is racing. I get to read Animagus Winter.

...

Surely one chapter won't take that long...

[identity profile] danceswchopstck.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 01:40 am (UTC)(link)
Looking forward to it! Have saved chapter 1 but not looked at it yet.

Um, did you want readers to think of Black Books when you named it Dusk Books?
*looks askance at the fannishness of that in an original novel*

But, as I say, looking forward to it!
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[identity profile] cageyklio.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 01:49 am (UTC)(link)
An homage is a wonderful thing.
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[identity profile] veryshortlist.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 03:23 am (UTC)(link)
Sam, fanfic reading is usually the equivalent of eating junk food. I regard it as a bit of a time waster and empty of nutrition/ brain nutrition. When I read Sweet Home um...four years ago, I thought 'I would buy this in a bookshop.' I'm so glad that you're sending your book to publishers again. Remember, it took J.K. Rowling a lot of rejections to get Harry Potter out there.

Having said all that, off to read. ;)

[identity profile] jiapa.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 03:44 am (UTC)(link)
I'm delighted to see this, and I'm looking forward to reading it, but I'm a bit concerned that showing us the story before shopping it to agents/publishers might decrease the appeal to them.

Of course, you're not going to tell them, but what if they make you sign a contract, like, that it's not been published before? And then they find out?

Mebbe if you only put a few chapters up and call them teasers?

Oh, I dunno. It's your novel and I'd love to see it, but I'd feel bad if it didn't get professionally published because all of us saw it first.

[identity profile] polaris-starz.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 04:19 am (UTC)(link)
For the record, I always thought that Rebuilding Ozymandias should have been published.

I thought the same thing. I was always incredibly fond of it.

[identity profile] cerulean-sky.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 04:34 am (UTC)(link)
I had it saved a couple harddrives ago. By now, it's long gone from my grasp.

[identity profile] silvery-wraith.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 04:45 am (UTC)(link)
omg, Animagus Winter.

*speechless*

Even with all the rejection (stupid publishers don't know what they're missing!), I'm excited that you're preparing for the publishing world. I feel like you're going on an adventure and this time, you're taking the whole cafe with you. Yay!

*off to read*

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