Sam's Backup Page ([personal profile] cblj_backup) wrote2009-02-10 03:59 pm

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Okay, kids, bring the popcorn and gather around. It's time for Sam to tell a story. Fortunately I think this story has quite a good ending: the unveiling of the Sekrit Project. :)

Four years ago, I moved to Austin to look for work after grad school. I wasn't having much luck, and I was living with my parents and basically confined to the house all day. After about four months of this I realised that if I didn't do something to validate my existence I was going to do something I'd regret, so I decided to write a novel. Starting in September, I wrote almost every night -- from ten to midnight, usually, or sometimes a little longer. I averaged about 900 words a day and gave myself Saturday nights off. That went on for four months.

I didn't talk about it because I was hoping to shop it around when it was done. I did finish it, edit it, and shop it, though none of the eighty-odd agents I sent it to took me up on it. I moved to Chicago, got some work, forgot about the book. A couple of weeks ago, while I was migrating hard drives, I took a look at it for the first time in two years and realised why it never sold: it was terrible.

So I rewrote it, using what I'd learned in the process of writing The Dead Isle. I cut about ten thousand words, added about thirty thousand, and included several subplots and characters that had been absent the first time around.

Where it gets interesting for most of you, especially those of you who were around for the first run of Cartographer's Craft, is the plot. I had no idea what I wanted to write about, and very few stories I wanted to tell, so I consulted Ellis Graveworthy: I went to Cartographer's Craft and looked up the plots of the novels he'd written.

Wizard Bird was too close to HP -- it was always meant to be a satire of it -- and Two Kneazles was as well, plus hello whole boatloads of historical research. Shop Gods was possible, but would have also required a lot more research than I was willing to put into what was essentially a survival mechanism at the time.

I wrote Animagus Winter.

I changed the location, shook up the plot until it wasn't dependent on the HP-verse anymore, and called it Nameless. It's a sort of magical-reality ode to small towns, with a little bit of mask theory and agrarian earth witchery thrown in for good measure. It had to settle for a few years before I was ready to really own it, but I am now.

I'd like to know what all of you think of it, before I give it one more rewrite and start looking at publishing again. I didn't want to post it all in a whack, because that's a bit overwhelming, so instead I'll be posting it in chapters. It'll be just like most of the fics I post, except that it's complete so I can schedule regular postings (like I did for Two Centres). New chapters will be going up three times a week: Tuesdays, Thursdays, and Sundays. Given that there are thirteen chapters, it'll be about a month's worth of new fiction, which seems like the right length of time. Sort of a Cafe Book Club.

So, without further fuss, I'd like to introduce you to Christopher Dusk, our narrator and the proprietor of Dusk Books in the small midwestern town of Low Ferry, Illinois. He'll take it from here. We both hope you enjoy it. :)

( The first week in September that year saw the heat of summer not yet faded in Chicago... )

[identity profile] why-me-why-not.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 05:49 am (UTC)(link)
Animagus Winter? Seriously? Sam, you just totally made my night! (even though I have homework to do and can't actual read anything yet, boo!)

[identity profile] m-erechyn.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 08:39 am (UTC)(link)
Well, I haven't gotten around to reading that first super-sekrit-project post, but I'd love to. And I also wanted to say thanks for just sharing your writing process/history with us-- I'm sure it helps you to get it down on paper (er, screen...) but it's fascinating and very cool to hear about other people's writing, especially if they're as talented as you. :D

[identity profile] hidden-gems.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 08:46 am (UTC)(link)
I finally started reading The Dead Isle but I'm going to have to put it on the back burner for a bit because I cannot miss this. I had to go back to "I wrote Animagus Winter." several times before I believed it.

I must be reasonable and work right now but I will read the first chapter before the end of the day.

This is so incredibly exciting. It deserves a Tamaki icon.

[identity profile] debitha.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 10:25 am (UTC)(link)
You wrote Animagus Winter. ♥ I really wish I wasn't at work right now, because I want to start reading immediately!

I am so very excited about this. (And The Dead Isle now that it's finished.) There goes my list of Books to Read.

2500 copy-editors. Sounds scary to me. :o)

[identity profile] annemjw.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 12:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh my god, this is so exciting! Yay!

**goes off to read**

[identity profile] copperbadge.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 12:42 pm (UTC)(link)
2500 copy-editors. Sounds scary to me.

Better 2500 copy-editors now than 2500 critics later...:D

[identity profile] copperbadge.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 12:42 pm (UTC)(link)
D'aww, look at his ickle face.

[identity profile] copperbadge.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 12:43 pm (UTC)(link)
The agents I sent it to were totally right to reject it, though, it wasn't publishable in first draft. So I'm okay with the huge fat rejection file I have :D

[identity profile] copperbadge.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 12:44 pm (UTC)(link)
To be honest, getting it published is not my first priority. If there's a demand for it in print, I can always do it myself. :) I've pretty much grown resigned to not ever being professionally published, so it's not like it's a huge goal or anything. :)

[identity profile] copperbadge.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 12:45 pm (UTC)(link)
I actually totally didn't even think of Black Books when I called it Dusk Books! LOL. They're not all that close, are they? Just that they're both one syllable...

[identity profile] copperbadge.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 04:50 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL, trust me, you're not coming off creepy -- plenty of people comment on this journal daily, and I'm always pleased to inspire people to do creative things. :) Good luck!

Re: Postscript: A request

[identity profile] copperbadge.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 04:51 pm (UTC)(link)
I wondered if I should -- it's not a pain at all, it's easily enough done. Although with Dead Isle there's also an index post, it's still best to have stuff tagged.

[identity profile] wyvernrabbit.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 06:01 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm always convinced when I comment on someone's journal I do not know I come off like a creep, even if there are tons of other people doing the same thing, but it's good to know I'm not.

Thank you for the luck. I will probably need it. XD

(Anonymous) 2009-02-11 06:05 pm (UTC)(link)
OH. MY. GOD.

Excuse me while I scream.

*incoherent joy*

[identity profile] debitha.livejournal.com 2009-02-11 10:05 pm (UTC)(link)
You make an excellent point. Just about to squee all over the place comment insightfully now.

[identity profile] danceswchopstck.livejournal.com 2009-02-12 02:36 am (UTC)(link)
In my mind, Dusk is right next to night, which is kind of black. I thought of it right away, even though my only exposure to Black Books is through what you write about it. Dunno whether others would read it that way. You could do a survey about it, if you want... ;)

I do notice that the name of the bookshop isn't given in the first chapter, itself, just in your introduction. You could check your later chapters to see if it's ever actually named in the text, and then decide what to do.

I enjoyed reading the chapter, last night, and am eager to see more of the book!

Um, do you want editing suggestions? I saw some places where I think commas were missing (though I do tend to overuse commas, myself) and some places where shorter and simpler sentences would have read more easily. Details available if wanted...

Thanks for writing this and sharing it with us!
Dances

[identity profile] nakki.livejournal.com 2009-02-12 07:06 am (UTC)(link)

[identity profile] copperbadge.livejournal.com 2009-02-12 04:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Definitely do want editing suggestions, yes!

[identity profile] danceswchopstck.livejournal.com 2009-02-14 02:36 am (UTC)(link)
I've put a bunch of Nameless edit suggestions for you in a restricted post over here: http://danceswchopstck.livejournal.com/44673.html

[identity profile] copperbadge.livejournal.com 2009-02-14 01:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I've got the post open but I'm doing a bit of rewrite on three so it might be a few days before I get to it -- I'll give you my response comments when I do :)

[identity profile] mcgonagalls-cat.livejournal.com 2009-02-16 06:47 am (UTC)(link)
You hadda do post this when I didn't have any time, didn't you....
And it hadda be so good....


Two tiny opinionated comments :

"Not yet!" the boy said cheerfully. "He just moved here."

"Has he now."
<-technically that’s a question.




Back in the shop, I switched on the lights and settled myself in a wing-chair near the door, feet propped on a battered ottoman. I had planned on reading, but the boy's questions had <delete, not necessary, sentence would be more interesting without. .

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