Oh, this is brilliant. It's rather amazing to see a Cyberwoman story with a completely new concept. Great characterizations like usual - Owen's mix of anger and caring, Tosh's gallows humor, Ianto's programming manifesting in various ways, and this:
"There's no way you're getting home tonight," he said. Ianto was staring at Jack's knuckles. "You can sleep here."
Ianto's lips curved upwards. "I can, can I?" he said, looking up at Jack slyly.
Oh, no. Oh, god, no.
This little section just really drove it home for me. Also love the mixing of old and new Who, though my knowledge of the former is pretty non-existent (looked up Victoria on Wiki). I'm really going to have to catch up to the old series.
And now I'm going to attempt to wait til you've posted the whole thing, cause I love to dive into long stories and not come up for air for awhile.
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"There's no way you're getting home tonight," he said. Ianto was staring at Jack's knuckles. "You can sleep here."
Ianto's lips curved upwards. "I can, can I?" he said, looking up at Jack slyly.
Oh, no. Oh, god, no.
This little section just really drove it home for me. Also love the mixing of old and new Who, though my knowledge of the former is pretty non-existent (looked up Victoria on Wiki). I'm really going to have to catch up to the old series.
And now I'm going to attempt to wait til you've posted the whole thing, cause I love to dive into long stories and not come up for air for awhile.