You hadda do post this when I didn't have any time, didn't you.... And it hadda be so good....
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"Not yet!" the boy said cheerfully. "He just moved here."
"Has he now." <-technically that’s a question.
Back in the shop, I switched on the lights and settled myself in a wing-chair near the door, feet propped on a battered ottoman. I had planned on reading, but the boy's questions had <delete, not necessary, sentence would be more interesting without.
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Date: 2009-02-16 06:47 am (UTC)And it hadda be so good....
Two tiny opinionated comments :
<-technically that’s a question.
<delete, not necessary, sentence would be more interesting without. .