So. I listened to the Torchwood BBC Radio Play this morning on the way to work.
Wow, was that
awkward. I cringed on behalf of everyone involved.
Granted, I have some prejudices about radio plays. I realise that radio dramas are more common in the UK, but I can't help believe that if, in the modern era, you're going to write a radio play for a pre-existing media franchise, you should really dig into the fact that it's radio. You can't just take a spec television script, rework it so the visuals aren't necessary, and have a successful radio event (which is what I suspect happened in this case). You cannot randomly assign banal observations to any handy character in order to get your visuals across. And, ideally, you shouldn't really bother with epic visuals to start with. There's just no point, and it pulls you away from the nucleus of the story.
ALSO:
REVERSING THE POLARITY FOR GREAT LULZ. I cracked up laughing
on the El when I heard that. Seriously? Really? You're going to reverse the polarity of the positron flow? How nice for you.
( Cut for spoilers. )The upshot, for me: The writing wasn't that great, and that crippled the actors; too much time was spent on expos and not enough time on plot. And hey, okay, you're doing a
radio drama for a show that not only features a hero obsessed with 40's culture but has
canonical time travel. A science experiment in Switzerland is seriously the best you could come up with?
But I have restrained myself from rewriting The Shrine so that it's not one long repetitive argument with Keller, I can restrain myself from writing what a Torchwood radio drama
should be.The sad thing too is that I looked up the writer when I got to work this morning, and he's done a ton of radio dramas for the Beeb Doctor Who franchise. Of course he also wrote Day In The Death, an episode I disliked, and Slow Decay and Border Princes, two really awful Torchwood novels. Seriously, I had to stop listneing to Slow Decay when I reached the scene where Rhys was having a conversation with his own belly fat. Border Princes is just a Torchwood Sue with good grammar.
I have learned to live with my expectations continually being disappointed because I realise that my expectations are usually unrealistically high. Even so, this managed to fail my consciously lowered standards.
*sighs*